Showing posts with label Jennie Bentley. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Jennie Bentley. Show all posts

Tuesday, July 9, 2013

The King is dead! Long live The King!

So I've been doing copy edits on the seventh DIY mystery, HOME FOR THE HOMICIDE - due out December 3rd and available for preorder HERE - and I ran into a conundrum about Elvis Presley.

You know, Elvis the Pelvis. The King of Rock'n Roll.
In the text, I referred to him as "The King."

The copy editor thinks it should be "the King."

I think "the King" could refer to any king of any country, including my own. I'm a Norwegian citizen, and Norway is a constitutional monarchy. We have a king. King Harald. Long live the King!

A statement which, to me, is quite different from "long live The King."

Of course, The King is dead. But still.

I took a Facebook poll, and most people agreed with me. Elvis is The King, not simply the King.

He's also The Pelvis, not simply the Pelvis. Unless he's Elvis the Pelvis, and then it's OK.

The Chicago Manual of Style disagrees, it seems. It says that "the," when run into a sentence (particularly with places, but also names), is lowercased.

I'm thinking rude thoughts about the Chicago Manual of Style right now.

In copy editing, there's something called STET, though.

Per Wikipedia, STET is a Latin word that means "let it stand," which is used by proofreaders and editors to instruct the typesetter or writer to disregard a change the editor or proofreader had previously marked.

In connection with this usage, STET is also sometimes used as a verb, e.g., "Stet that colon."

I'm so stetting The King!

Saturday, July 6, 2013

A Cutthroat Update

I keep getting asked about more Cutthroat books, so I thought I'd clarify where we stand on those.

I'm currently about halfway through writing #7, which will be called KICKOUT CLAUSE, for real this time. I hope to have the book out by the end of the year, but I can't guarantee anything. Sometimes stuff happens, you know?

I have plans for books 8 and 9. Fairly sure I know exactly what'll happen in ...#8, and I have a good if basic idea for #9 based on what I know will have to happen in the series at that point. I'm working off a basic story arc here. The same way the first five books were planned together, these four (6-9) are planned as one long, over-arching storyline, too, with one book (hopefully) flowing seamlessly into the next. 

There may or may not be a wedding at the end of #9. I'm just not sure yet whether it'll fit there or not. It depends on length and how the end of #9 winds up. If there isn't a wedding in #9, I'll either write a book 10, or a novella or short story.

God willing and all that, of course. Again, stuff happens.

Beyond that, I'm not sure what'll happen. I could possibly foresee another book or novella, if things turn out the way I think they will, but it's hard to make a committed, settled relationship work in fiction, long-term. All the tension is gone, and it becomes sort of boring to read about. To write about, too. So I don't want to drag things out forever. I know you guys love Rafe and Savannah - I do too - but at some point it'll be time to wave goodbye and let them get on with their lives.

Not quite yet, though.

Thursday, May 30, 2013

Virginia Creeper 2

For your enjoyment, here's chapter 2 of Virginia Creeper.


2.

 
“Ohmigod!” Kelli squealed when I told her what had happened. “Chelsea’s dead?”

I held the phone away from my ear, grimacing. This is why texting is so much better than calling: it’s not so hard on the eardrums. “Yeah. But that’s not the problem right now, OK, Kel? I need to talk to your dad. My folks are out of town, and Sheriff Thayer took Jared down to the police station. He needs an adult there with him.”

“Oh, right. Sure.” She didn’t bother to move the phone very far from her mouth when she yelled for her father, and it made my ears ring again. Then she lowered her voice to a whisper. “But she’s dead? Really?”

“That’s what the sheriff said.”

“Wow,” Kelli breathed, with—I couldn’t help but notice—a lot more excitement than sadness or shock. Not that I was feeling all that grief-stricken myself. I hadn’t really liked Chelsea. Still, I was shocked at what had happened, and even more shocked that Jared—Jared, who worshiped the ground Chelsea’s designer shoes had walked on!—was suspected of hurting her.

“How?” Kelli wanted to know.

“I don’t know.” And I didn’t think I wanted to find out. Still, from the questions the sheriff had asked, I thought I could assume that someone had beaten, or at least hit, Chelsea.

For a second my head reeled at the thought of Chelsea, beaten to death. Her pretty face pummeled, her nose broken, her teeth shattered, her skin bruised and bloodied...

The kitchen started to spin, and I got a grip on myself by clutching the edge of the counter. “The sheriff didn’t say, and I didn’t want to ask. I’m sure your dad will find out. Is he coming?”

“In a minute. What did the sheriff say?”

I repeated the few details Sheriff Thayer had let slip. They weren’t many, just that Chelsea was dead, discovered this morning at the trailhead on Pecan Street, and that it had happened last night sometime. If it hadn’t, why would the sheriff ask me if I’d seen anything out of the ordinary on our walk home from Falcon Park?

“I didn’t notice anything,” Kelli said when I asked. “Just a bunch of people walking and driving around. I didn’t see Jared’s car at all. Rufus drove by a couple of times, though.”

“He did?” I hadn’t noticed, and I was usually pretty aware of Rufus.

She nodded. I could hear the clink as her dangling earring hit the phone. “Once when we’d just turned onto East Main. He was leaving the ballpark and going towards home. Once about fifteen minutes later, going the other way, when we were near the Tavern. And once coming back again just after we’d turned onto Maple. I guess maybe Jared asked him to keep an eye on you, to make sure you got home safe.”

“Maybe.” I wouldn’t put it past Jared, putting Rufus on guard-duty if he couldn’t keep up with me himself. “You didn’t see him anywhere near Pecan Street, did you?”

Kelli did a sort of mental eye-roll, one I could hear through the phone. “He was in a car, Jo. It’d take him—oh—two minutes to get to Pecan. What do you think?”

“I was just wondering if he might have noticed something,” I said. “If he happened to drive by the trailhead last night.”

“You could ask him,” Kelli said.

“I would,” I answered, “except I’ve got a few other, more important things to worry about right now. I really do need to talk to your dad, Kel. Can you call him again?”

“He’s coming down the stairs right now.” She moved the phone away from her ear, and I heard her voice, muffled and from a distance, explaining things to her father. “It’s Jo, dad. Sheriff Thayer has taken Jared downtown to talk to him about Chelsea Jacobsen’s murder. She was found dead this morning at the trailhead on Pecan Street. They think Jared did it.”

My stomach clenched when I heard that last sentence. I hadn’t told Kelli that, not in so many words, and I hadn’t let myself put the thought into words, either. Hearing it said like that was shocking, like a splash of cold water in the face. I struggled for a second, breathlessly, trying to get on top of anger and a sense of betrayal. Then I forced myself to breathe and relax. Kelli hadn’t meant it the way it sounded. She knew Jared; she knew he’d never hurt Chelsea. She was just explaining things to her father in the quickest possible way. I should be grateful that she didn’t beat around the bush.

“Jo?” Owen Stanley’s usually mellow voice was shriller than usual. “Are you OK, darling?”

“I’m fine,” I said, not quite truthfully.         

“Tell me what happened. Everything, from the beginning.”

It was hard to stand there and go over it all again, calmly, when I wanted to scream at Mr. Stanley to get over to the police station now. But I got through it. “I called our parents,” I ended the monologue, my voice shaking, “but they’re in Williamsburg, and although they cut the conference short and they’re coming home, they won’t be here until late this afternoon. Jared needs somebody with him now.”

“I know, darling,” Mr. Stanley said. “But if I don’t understand the situation when I go down there, I’ll do more harm than good. So Jared admitted to having an argument with Chelsea last night?”

“He admitted it to me. Not to the sheriff. Although he probably has by now. Mr. Stanley...”

“I know, Jo. Just bear with me, darling. Did he say what the argument was about?”

“He said he didn’t want to talk about it. He said it was—” I swallowed, “private and personal, between him and Chelsea.”

Owen Stanley was quiet for a moment. “Any idea what he might have been talking about?”

“None. I’m sorry. It must have been serious, though. I mean, she really scratched him.”

I wondered if Jared had bothered to put Neosporin on those scratches last night. And then I wondered if I was insane for even thinking about that right now.

Mr. Stanley was quiet for a moment. “Anything else you can tell me, Jo?”

“No,” I said. Both because I really couldn’t think of anything I’d forgotten to mention, but more because I really, really wanted him to get going. Our parents were making tracks, but wouldn’t be back in Abingdon for hours, and in the meantime, Jared was alone and probably scared. He tries to act grown up, as if things don’t bother him, but this had to be frightening. And if he hadn’t killed Chelsea—and of course he hadn’t—he must be floored by the news that she was dead. More so if they’d argued last night and hadn’t worked things out afterwards.

“OK,” Mr. Stanley said. “I’ll head down to the police station now, and stay with Jared until your folks get there. What are you planning to do, Jo?”

“I’m not sure,” I said. I hadn’t thought past getting Mr. Stanley on the phone and sending him after Jared. “I’d like to go to the police station myself, but I guess that doesn’t make any sense, does it?”

“Better not,” Mr. Stanley agreed. “Just stay where you are. Do you want me to send Kelli over?”

“No.” My rejection was automatic. Then I tried to soften it. “I don’t think I’d be very good company, and I’m sure Kelli has other things she wants to do.”

Like texting everyone she knew, to tell them the news. She’s my best friend, but she’s also a bit of a gossip. And this—the murder of a classmate—was the biggest story to hit Abingdon in years. Plus, if I had disliked Chelsea, Kelli had absolutely loathed her, and although I wouldn’t go as far as to say she was happy that Chelsea was dead, she didn’t seem to be feeling much pain, either.

“Can I talk to her again?” I asked.

Mr. Stanley handed the phone over and left. I could hear the Stanleys’ heavy front door open and close behind him. Kelli came back on. “Do you want me to come over and hang out with you, Jo?” She sounded willing, if not exactly eager.

“You don’t have to,” I said, and tried to ignore the relief coming through the phone at me. “Do me a favor, though, Kel.”

“Sure,” Kelli said.

“When you text everyone, please don’t tell them that the police think Jared did it. I’m sure they’ll let him go soon, and that’ll be it. They’re probably just talking to him about whether he saw anyone hanging around last night. Or maybe Chelsea mentioned that someone had been bothering her, or something.”

“OK,” said Kelli.

“There’s no way they can really suspect Jared. You know him; he was crazy about her. And I don’t want all of Abingdon to think he killed his girlfriend. So if you could just not mention that, I’d appreciate it.”

“Sure, Jo,” Kelli said. “I won’t say anything about Jared being the main suspect.”

I flinched, but told myself that she hadn’t meant it the way it sounded. Kelli wasn’t mean; she just liked to talk, and didn’t always think about what she said before she said it.

“I’ll let you know how it goes, ‘kay?”

“OK, Jo,” Kelli said. “I’ll call you later.”

She hung up. I looked around, blankly, thinking about the countless hours stretched out in front of me, empty of anything but fear and worry.

            I do have other friends, but there was no one I wanted to see. If I couldn’t trust Kelli, who’d been my best friend for as long as I could remember, I certainly wasn’t going to trust anyone else. It’d be hours before my parents got back, and when they did, they’d go straight to the police station. I didn’t want to go outside, just in case I met someone I knew—which was practically all of Abingdon. Even if they didn’t know that Jared was down at the police station being interviewed—my mind shied away from saying, or even thinking, ‘interrogated’—the whole town knew that he and Chelsea had been going out, and it’d be natural to ask how he was taking the news. No, I was better off staying inside, where no one could find me. Even if that meant I’d be spending the day alone, climbing the walls.

            I tried to read, but nothing kept my attention. I tried to watch TV, but there was nothing on except religious programs—thou shalt not kill—movies with murders and stabbings and pretty girls getting killed, and nature programs. And I didn’t need any reminders of the Creeper Trail right then, thanks very much. Whenever I closed my eyes, and sometimes when I didn’t, I saw that picture of Chelsea from earlier: her long, blond hair sticky with blood and her body crumpled in a heap in the grass and spring flowers.

            Jared hadn’t had time to straighten his room this morning before being hauled off to the police station, and I told myself I’d be doing him a favor if I did it for him. So I made the bed and emptied the trash and stacked the books and straightened the desk, and then I pulled the laundry basket from under the bed and started piling it full of dirty clothes.

            There was laundry all over the floor, including the dirty socks and underwear I’d smelled earlier. It would never occur to me to leave my used panties and bras on the rug in my room, but boys are different. Several pairs of Jared’s boxers were on the floor, and I picked them up with two fingers, and dropped them in the basket. Gross!    

            The baseball uniform from last night was crumpled in a pile in the corner, and when I shook it out, I couldn’t help noticing a few things. One was a tiny spatter of rusty brown spots across one shoulder and side; it was probably where some of Jared’s blood had landed after Chelsea tried to gouge his eye out. I’d have to pre-treat that with stain remover before I put the shirt in the washer.

            On both sleeves, standing out against the blue of the undershirt, were three or four evenly spaced spots, mud or dirt, just above where Jared’s wrists would be.

It took me a moment to realize what they were, and when I did, I felt lightheaded, like all the blood was running out of my head and pooling somewhere in my stomach.

            They were finger marks. In exactly the spot where they’d be if someone had grabbed both Jared’s arms last night. To try to—for instance—stop him from hurting them.

            Before I had time to decide between leaving the shirt in Jared’s room, where someone else might find it, or putting it through the permanent press cycle, the doorbell rang.

            It was a tough decision, and I was glad for an excuse not to have to make it. Washing the shirt would remove any evidence that might be on it, but I would be setting myself up for a possible charge of accessory to murder, or at the very least, of impeding the investigation. But leaving it where it was meant someone else could get hold of it and maybe use it to make the case against Jared look worse.

            It was hours too early for mom and dad to be back in town, but that didn’t keep me from hoping as I launched myself down the stairs, Jared’s shirt still in my hand. I dropped it on the bench in the hallway on my way past, my heart beating double-time, both from the headlong rush and from the anticipation when I grabbed the knob and yanked the door open.

            “Oh!” I stopped on the threshold, my heart doing an extra somersault before settling down into a slightly steadier rhythm. “Hi, Rufus.”

            Rufus nodded. We looked at each other for a moment.

“Won’t you come in?” I stepped back. Rufus moved silently across the threshold and into the house, brushing against my arm on the way. I felt a little zap of electricity. He headed toward the kitchen while I closed and locked the front door, my thoughts in the usual jumble. He has this way of scrambling all my circuits.   

I’ve known Rufus pretty much my entire life, and I’ve had sort of a crush on him almost as long. Not so much of a crush that I don’t get interested in other people occasionally, but it’s basically always there, sort of underneath everything else. He doesn’t know about it, thank God. At least I don’t think he does. And of course he doesn’t feel the same way. If he did, I’d have no need to get interested in anyone else. Jared knows, from watching me blush and stumble over my words and my feet for long enough to guess what the problem is. But although he gives me a hard time in private, so far he seems to have been gentleman enough to keep his knowledge to himself. I can’t imagine it’s been easy, either, considering how close they are.

Or used to be. Since Chelsea came into the picture, Jared’s had less time for Rufus. A whole lot less time. It was several months since Rufus had been over to the house. No wonder he looked different. At least that’s the excuse I gave myself for staring at him. Truth is, I don’t think I could have looked away if I had wanted to.

I didn’t notice that his lips were moving until he’d said a word or two. “...know, Jo, it’s not a good idea to open the door without looking outside first. I might have been someone else.”

No problem guessing how that sentence had started. Lucky break. Sometimes he says things I totally miss, and I sound like a real idiot trying to catch up. This time, maybe I wouldn’t. “I’d never mistake you for anyone else, Rufus.”

Or maybe I should just resign myself to sounding like an idiot anyway. I wanted to knock my head against the kitchen counter, but I thought it might look a little weird, so I just bit my lip instead, wishing I’d kept my mouth shut.

Rufus smiled. My breath stuttered.

Here’s the thing: Rufus is quite possibly the most beautiful boy—or person of the opposite sex—I’ve seen in my life. And that includes the movie stars on TV, and Josh Turner the year he dropped in to play the Highland Festival. And for that matter Mr. Hawkins, our Language Arts teacher, who looks like a painting of Lord Byron. I’ve never been able to figure out why Chelsea would choose to go out with Jared when she could have had Rufus.

Not that there’s anything wrong with Jared. He’s tall, dark, and handsome, he gets good grades, and he’s popular, too. Any girl would be lucky to have him. I’m not arguing with that. But Rufus is... well, like I said, he’s beautiful. Ridiculously, heart-stoppingly beautiful. And Chelsea would have to be blind as well as stupid not to notice.

Or maybe it’s just me. Sometimes I’m able to look at him—from a distance, usually—and just see a pale, slight boy with reddish-brown hair and good bone structure. The problem is the rest of the time, when I get caught up in the flawless porcelain of his skin, or the way his hair changes color from dark cinnamon to bronze to chestnut in the sunlight, or how his eyelashes—long and thick and smudgy—could make him a fortune as a Cover Girl model.

This was one of those times. From the neck down, he looked just like any of the other boys at AHS. Faded jeans, scuffed sneakers, and a long-sleeved oatmeal-colored T-shirt that put some color in his cheeks and brought out the green in his eyes, both at the same time. From the neck up...

“...doing, Jo?” Rufus said. I pulled myself together again. Luckily, it wasn’t too hard to piece together the parts of this sentence that I’d missed, either.

“I’m OK. You?”

He made a sort of impatient noise, and I caught up, finally. “Oh, you mean about Jared? Did Kelli call you?”

He nodded. Waves of amber grain... sorry, waves of chestnut hair fell over his forehead, and he drove his hand through to get it out of his eyes. I suppressed a sigh, this one just as much envy as infatuation. Rufus has the most gorgeous head of hair in the world, thick and shiny and that fabulous color...

“...going on, Jo?”

“What...? Oh.” I tore my eyes away. There’s really no other word for it. “Would you like something to drink? Lemonade? Milk? Juice?”

If I kept my back to him, maybe I’d be able to tell him what was going on without losing my train of thought constantly.

“Lemonade, please.” I heard a chair leg scrape as he sat down at the table. I pulled two glasses from the cabinet above the microwave, took the lemonade from the refrigerator, and poured. While I did it, making sure not to look at him, I answered his question.

“If Kelli contacted you, you know as much as I do. Apparently Chelsea was killed last night, over at the trailhead on Pecan Street. Or maybe she was killed somewhere else and dumped there; I’m not really sure. Sheriff Thayer showed up here this morning to talk to Jared. They had an argument last night—Chelsea and Jared—and she scratched his face. There was tissue under her fingernails...”

I shuddered involuntarily at the thought. The steady stream of lemonade jittered, and a few drops splashed on the counter. “The sheriff wanted Jared’s DNA for comparison.”

I snagged a paper towel from the roll and wiped the counter.

“Kelli said Jared’s been arrested?”

Rufus glanced up at me from under his lashes as I placed the lemonade on the table in front of him. My heart skipped a beat, but it got lost in a wave of anger.

“She said what? No, he’s not been arrested! And Kelli promised me she wasn’t going to say that!”

“I don’t think she’s saying it to everyone,” Rufus said as I took a seat across from him. “She was probably just trying to give me more reason to go over here. So if he’s not been arrested, what’s going on?”

I sighed, sipping my own lemonade, watching his hands instead of his face. “The sheriff is talking to him, I guess. About last night. And whatever it was he and Chelsea argued about. What he said to make her try to scratch his eyes out. He must have said something.”

“Don’t you know?”

I could feel his eyes on me, but I didn’t look up to meet them. I shook my head. “We didn’t have much time to talk. Jared wasn’t home when I went to bed last night, and he didn’t wake up until the sheriff got here this morning. Or if he did, he didn’t come downstairs.”

The realization that my brother might have been awake but avoiding me, shocked me a little. Why would he have done that, unless he had something to hide? Unless he’d known, beforehand, what had happened to Chelsea?

But no, I told myself, he was probably just trying to put off the moment when I’d cause a fuss about the scratches on his face.

“Oh,” Rufus said. There was something a little odd about his voice, but when I glanced up, the sight of his face blew anything coherent right out of my head. He was looking down, making circles with the bottom of his glass on the tabletop, and his eyelashes were doing that thing they do, when they make shadows across his cheeks in the light.

“Kelli said you were driving around last night,” I said. “She said she’d seen you a couple of times on our way home from the ballgame. Coming and going.”

“I had to go back for something,” Rufus said, and I couldn’t help but notice the flush that stained his cheekbones. Was he embarrassed? Could he... had he gone back because of a girl?

The thought of Rufus with a girl—another girl; I was perfectly OK with the idea of Rufus with me—took an uncomfortable grip on my stomach and twisted.

“Well,” I said, eyes on my hands, “I just wondered if you’d noticed anything while you were driving around. Did you see Jared and Chelsea fighting? Or go close to the trailhead at all?”

“Why would I go close to the trailhead?” Rufus answered. “There’s nothing there in the middle of the night. No, I didn’t see Chelsea and Jared fighting. Or anything else.”

“Do you have any idea what they were fighting about?”

I looked up, got caught in the depths of his eyes, fluttered ineffectually for a moment, and tore myself away.

“How would I know anything about it? I wasn’t there.”

He stood, and turned to the sink to place his empty glass in it. I followed him down the hallway toward the front door again.

Just before getting there, Rufus slowed down. “What’s this?”

He grabbed Jared’s uniform shirt from the bench in the foyer. I didn’t say anything, since it seemed obvious. It was a white baseball shirt, with Abingdon in blue script across the chest and Brennan in block letters across the back. I could see the moment Rufus’s eyes caught the finger marks on the sleeves, and a second later his mind caught the implication, too. His back stiffened.

“I was picking up the laundry when you came,” I said, my voice amazingly normal. “I was planning to wash it.”

I reached out. Rufus’s eyes scanned my face for a second before he gave me the shirt. “Yeah,” he said, turning toward the door. “Good idea. I’ll see you tomorrow, Jo.”

“Right,” I said, and locked the door behind him.    

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Saturday, May 25, 2013

Virginia Creeper

Once upon a time I wrote what I thought would be a Young Adult mystery about a 16 year old girl whose 17 year old brother is arrested for murder. The name of it was Virginia Creeper, which I still think is one of the best titles I've ever come up with.

However, my agent didn't like the book and everyone told me I didn't have a YA 'voice,' so I never did anything more about it. The book is finished, to the best of my ability, and I think it's cute and not a bad mystery either, but they tell me there's no market for it.

So I thought maybe I'd share it here. A chapter a week or something like that, over the summer. And if y'all like it, maybe I'll put it together into a book and publish it after all.

Without further ado, here's Chapter 1 of Virginia Creeper:



1.


            Chelsea Jacobsen was trouble.

            I knew it the first time I saw her walk down the corridor of Abingdon High School, turning the head of every boy (and a few of the girls) she passed on the way. Including the head of my brother Jared, who should have known better. Not to mention the head of his best friend Rufus, who definitely should have. Not that that stopped either of them.

            Further acquaintance did not improve my first impression. Chelsea turned out to be shallow, manipulative, vain, and catty. And unfortunately for me, I got to know her quite well. Or as well as anyone in Abingdon, anyway. Jared, who is not usually a fool, even if he is my brother, seemed like he couldn’t see past her corn-silk hair and pierced navel and—let’s just say it—the fact that she put out, and he kept insisting that he loved her, and she loved him, and they were going to grow old together.

As if.

            Still, royal bitch though she was, she didn’t deserve what happened to her. Nobody really deserves being beaten and strangled and left in the dirt like a blown tire, do they?

 

            My name is Jolene Brennan. For obvious reasons, I go by Jo. Sometimes Jolie, although it’s really just Rufus who calls me that. And Jared, when he wants to see me squirm.

We live in a small town called Abingdon, just west of I-81 and almost as far south as Tennessee, at the beginning of the Virginia Creeper Trail.

That’s not what it sounds like, by the way. Virginia Creeper is a plant, one of those vines that strangles everything in its path, like Kudzu, and the Virginia Creeper Trail is a biking, running, riding and—when we have snow—cross-country skiing trail that runs along an abandoned railroad line from Abingdon to Whitetop, on the North Carolina state line. A 4-8-0 steam engine sits at the beginning of the trail, on Pecan Street in Abingdon. Supposedly, the trail got its nickname from those old locomotives, and the way they crept up the trail’s steep grades. All the creeping ivy in the area probably had something to do with it too.

In any case, the Creeper Trail has nothing to do with anything creepy, like people getting strangled. At least not until Chelsea Jacobson’s body was found at the head of the trail one Sunday morning in April.

            It was a pair of bicyclists who found her, when they headed out for their weekly ride. Any other weekend, one of those bikers might have been me, since Jared had a habit of hitting the trail early sometimes, and of making me go with him. He’d have preferred Chelsea, I’m sure, but his new girlfriend wasn’t the outdoorsy type, and Rufus had been mostly absent since Jared started spending so much time with her. So Jared settled for bike-riding with his little sister instead. But this weekend he hadn’t suggested it. Instead of dragging me out of bed at dawn, Jared slept late. I still hadn’t seen him when the doorbell rang at a few minutes past ten.

            Abingdon is as safe a place as any, but it was just the two of us in the house—and one of us was, as far as I could tell, dead asleep upstairs—so I made sure to peek out the window onto the porch before I opened the door. What I saw out there made my eyes widen and my hands fumble when I twisted the deadbolt and turned the knob.

            “Morning, Jolene,” Sheriff Thayer said.

            Most everyone knows everyone else in Abingdon, at least those of us who have been around for a while. Matilda Thayer has been sheriff since before I was born, which is more than sixteen years now. She and my mom went to school together. At AHS, where Jared and I go now. Jared is seventeen, by the way, and Mattie Thayer’s been sheriff longer than Jared’s been alive, too. So the fact that she knows us and calls us by our first names doesn’t mean anything. It’s not like I’ve got a police record or anything.

            “Morning, sheriff,” I answered. “What’s up?”

            She looked serious, and for a second I worried that something had happened to mom and dad; that she was coming to tell us we were orphans.

            “Your brother here?” She glanced over my shoulder into the interior of the house.

            “Jared?”It’s not like I have any other brothers, but I wasn’t thinking straight, what with the panic. “I think he’s upstairs.”

I hadn’t seen him, but the door to his room had been open when I went to bed last night, and now it was closed. I stepped aside, but the sheriff didn’t move off the welcome mat.

            “How old is Jared now, Jo? Has he turned eighteen yet?”

            I shook my head. My mouth was dry. “His birthday’s in November. Why?”

            The sheriff didn’t explain. “Your folks not home?” she asked instead.

            I breathed a sigh of relief. At least nothing was wrong with mom and dad, then. “They drove up to Williamsburg on Friday. For some kind of conference. Daughters of the Revolution or Colonial Virginia or something.”

            Our parents are amateur historians, or hysterians if you prefer. All about preserving old Abingdon, preserving the Creeper Trail, preserving any little piece of the past they can. Since Abingdon’s the oldest town west of the Blue Ridge Mountains, there’s plenty to preserve around here.

            “When are they coming back?” Mattie Thayer asked.

I shrugged.“Probably not until late. You know how it is. When they get with the other nuts, they forget the time.”

            The sheriff nodded. She’s a bit of a history nut herself, although not as rabid as mom and dad. Still, she takes part in the living history reenactments during the Highland Festival, and does something for the Hysterical Society, as well. If she hadn’t been on duty this weekend, maybe she’d have made the 5-hour trek to Colonial Williamsburg, too.

            But she was in uniform, with a night-stick and gun holster hanging from her belt, and here on our porch at barely 10 o’clock on a Sunday morning, when any God-fearing Southern Baptist ought to be in church. Something was going on, and it made me nervous. Why was Sheriff Thayer asking about Jared’s age? And why did she seem concerned that our parents weren’t here? We were old enough to take care of ourselves, and it wasn’t the first time the two of us had been home alone for the weekend. The sheriff had to know that.

            “If you’ll wait a minute,” I said, letting go of the door, “I’ll go drag Jared out of bed.”

            Sheriff Thayer lifted a hand to stop me, but then she let it fall again. I waited a second, just to see if she’d tell me not to go, but when she didn’t, I excused myself and headed up the stairs to the second floor.

            We live in one of the historic homes, an 1896 Victorian on Maple Street, with a proper entry foyer and floating staircase. It’s been in the family since it was built; these days, we couldn’t hope to be able to afford something like that. Nowadays, only people with money—like Chelsea’s dad, Congressman Jacobsen from Washington—can afford to move to Abingdon.

            The first floor of our house has a couple of parlors and a formal dining room, along with a kitchen—updated, since mom draws the line at cooking on a wood-burning stove, however historic it may be—while the upstairs has four bedrooms and a bath. Mom and dad have two of the bedrooms, one to sleep in, and one for all the books and paperwork they’ve collected over the years. Jared and I have the other two. His is at the end of the hall on the right. I put my ear to the door and held my breath, but I couldn’t hear anything from inside. Not even a snore.

            “Jared?”I turned the knob and pushed the door open, peering around it. Maybe he wasn’t here. The last time I’d seen him was last night, when he and Chelsea left Falcon Park after the baseball game. I’d walked home with our across-the-street-and-four-doors-down neighbor (and my best friend) Kelli Stanley, and by eleven or so, I’d gone to bed. For all I knew, Jared had spent the whole night with Chelsea. He didn’t have a habit of staying out all night, but with mom and dad gone, maybe he’d decided to take advantage of the opportunity. “You here, Jared?”

            He was here. Or at least he had been. The bed had been slept in, though it was empty now. The covers were trailing on the floor, as if someone had gotten out in a hurry.

            “Jared?”I took a step into the room, wrinkling my nose at the smell of stale sweat and gym socks. “Did you go out already?”

            Maybe he’d gotten up early and gone biking without me—

            No sooner had the thought formed, than a movement on the edge of my vision caused my heart to jump up into my throat and continue beating there.

“Dammit,” I said weakly, after catching my breath. I had planned to say more, but I got a good look at him, and curiosity took over. “What happened to you?”

            “Who’s downstairs?” Jared countered.

            “The sheriff. Why are you hiding behind the door? And why’s your face bloody?”

            “My face isn’t bloody,” Jared said. It was a bald-faced lie. Three long furrows ran across his cheek from just below the left eye to his chin. Chelsea must have been very upset to scratch that hard.“What’s the sheriff doing here?”

            “She didn’t say. Although she asked for you. What did you do last night?”

The more I looked at him, the worse the scratches looked. Another half inch, and she would have taken his eye out.

            “I didn’t do anything,” Jared said. “It’s just left over from the game.”

            He turned away. I walked around him so we were standing face to face again. “I was watching, Jared. Every minute. You didn’t plow face-first into any bases last night, and none of the other players got that close to you, either. Did you and Chelsea have a fight?”

            “I don’t want to talk about it,” Jared said. “What did you tell the sheriff?”

            I huffed impatiently. “That I’d go get you, of course. That you were asleep, but I’d wake you.”

            “Figures,”Jared muttered, with—I couldn’t help but notice—a glance toward the window. The second story window, overlooking the backyard. With a handy drainpipe just off to the left, on the corner of the house.

            “You’ve got to be kidding!” I said. “What’s going on, Jared? Why is she here? What happened last night? Why don’t you want to talk to her?”

            “Nothing happened.” He looked at me, finally. “I swear, Jo. Chelsea and I had a fight, but I didn’t hurt her. I swear.”

            “Well, of course you didn’t,” I said. Our mother hadn’t raised a girlfriend-beater. “What happened?”

            “I don’t want to talk about it,” Jared said again, and turned away from me. “Get lost so I can put on some clothes, OK? I’m not gonna change with you in here.”

            “I appreciate that.” I’ve seen my brother naked before—we’ve shared the same bathroom for sixteen years—but it wasn’t something I needed to see again. Ever.

I turned away and reached for the doorknob, but before I could grab it, there was a creak from outside in the hallway. Jared’s head whipped around, and his eyes narrowed.

            “Probably just the resident ghost,” I said lightly, grasping the knob. Jared snorted. He knew as well as I did that there’s no such thing as ghosts in our house. Some of the other old houses in town claim to have specters, but ours isn’t one of them. And like me, Jared must have recognized the creaking floorboard halfway down the hall, the one the two of us are so used to that we automatically step over it.

            Of course I knew who was outside. There were only three of us in the house. And it was a little worrisome that Sheriff Thayer had snuck upstairs after me. What did she think I was doing; telling Jared to make a run for it because the law was on his tail?

            Then again, considering Jared’s instinctive glance at the window, maybe Mattie Thayer wouldn’t be as far off as I’d like to believe.

            In any event, she was outside in the hallway, so close that I almost stepped on her when I came out of Jared’s room.

“Oh,” I said, faking surprise as well as I could, “I didn’t realize you were up here, sheriff. Jared’s getting dressed. He’ll be out in a minute.”

            The sheriff nodded and backed up a couple steps, so she wasn’t crowding my personal space. She tucked a strand of her blond pageboy behind her ear and avoided my eyes.

            “Why don’t we go sit in the living room?” I added, moving in the direction of the stairs. “It’s more comfortable than standing here.”

            The sheriff shot a glance at Jared’s door, the one I had considerately closed behind me—hey, my brother was changing!—but apart from looking like she wished she could insist on hanging out in the upstairs hall, she didn’t object, just turned and followed me down the hallway. I stepped over the creaky board; the sheriff put her regulation shoe squarely on it and made it squeal.

            “So what did you do last night, Jo?” she asked when we were sitting across from one another in the living room. Her voice was calm and friendly, almost uninterested, but her eyes were sharp. I wasn’t fooled into thinking that she was just making conversation. There was more to it than that. But since I had nothing to hide, I didn’t see the harm in telling the truth.

            “Baseball game at school. Jared was playing.”

            “How’d it go?”

            “We won,” I said, “barely. Jared scored a run. A couple of other people scored runs. The other team’s players scored some runs. The final score was 6-5, after extra innings.”

            “So the game went late?”

            “A little later than usual. It ended around 9:45, I think.”

            “What did you do then?” She glanced over her shoulder toward the stairs, but whatever sound she thought she heard must have been her imagination, because Jared wasn’t coming yet.

            “Walked home with Kelli,” I said. “Cleaned up after dinner. Loaded the dishwasher. Brushed my teeth. Went to bed.”

“Kelli Stanley? What time did you girls get here? Which way did you go?”

            I blinked. “I got home around 10:15, I guess. We didn’t walk fast. And there are only so many ways to walk here from Falcon Park. We didn’t go through the cemetery, so we went straight down East Main Street, mostly.”

            “Did you go anywhere near the trailhead?”

            I blinked. “The Creeper Trail, you mean? That’s in the opposite direction. Why do you ask?”

            “I don’t suppose you noticed anything going on anywhere?”

            “What do you mean, anything?” I’d noticed lots of things. Including the fact that she wasn’t answering my questions. “It was a Saturday night, and the weather was nice. The Tavern was full. So was the coffee shop. There was a performance at the Barter Theatre that let out late. People were walking the streets. Lots of people. And more than just us were going home after the game.”

            “What about Jared?” the sheriff asked.

            “What about him?”

            “When did he get home?”

            I hesitated, but only for a second. “Not sure. You’ll have to ask him.”

            “He didn’t walk with you and Kelli?”

            I shook my head. “He’s been dating Chelsea Jacobson for a couple of months. You know, Congressman Jacobson’s daughter, from Washington? They left together after the game. I guess he drove her home—she lives in one of those new McMansions on the north side of town. He wasn’t here by eleven, but I don’t think he would have stayed out too late, when he knew I was home alone. I couldn’t put the security chain on the door until he got here.”

            The sheriff opened her mouth, but whatever she was going to say next was forgotten when Jared came down the stairs. He’d changed into jeans and a blue, long-sleeved T-shirt, and the scratches on his cheek were bright red. I could see the sheriff’s eyes lingering on them for a moment before she nodded, cordially enough. “Jared.”

            “Sheriff Thayer.” Jared nodded back. He had his hands in his pockets, and he looked relaxed, but I knew him well enough to see the tightness in his jaw and shoulders, and the wary look at the back of his eyes. They were tired, with dark circles, like bruises, under them.

            “Have a seat.” The sheriff gestured to the chair at the end of the table.

The command seemed a little pushy when you considered that she was a guest in our house, but Jared didn’t say anything, just walked to it and sat.

“I’ve been talking to Jo about last night,” Mattie Thayer added.

            “What about last night?” Jared’s eyes caught mine for a second.

I shook my head. So far I had no idea what was going on.

            “She tells me you left with Chelsea Jacobson after the baseball game was over?”

            Jared nodded.

            “Did you two have a fight?”

            The sheriff’s voice was sympathetic, understanding. And with three deep gouges from Chelsea’s nails across his cheek, there was really no way Jared could deny it, even if he’d wanted to. “It was no big deal,” he muttered.

Obviously the deal had been big enough to make Chelsealose her cool. Although considering how pea-brained she was, that didn’t mean much. Maybe Jared had been worried about letting me and Kelli walk home alone at night, and Chelseahad gotten pissed. She didn’t like Kelli, who was the prettiest girl at AHS, and the one all the boys liked best before Chelsea came along. She didn’t like me much either, if it came to that. She tolerated me because I was Jared’s sister, but we’d never be best friends. Or maybe she’d wanted Jared to spend the night with her and he’d refused, or maybe he’d been too preoccupied to notice her new hairstyle. But the sheriff didn’t know Chelsea, and looking at those scratches, I didn’t know that I could blame her for being suspicious.

“So you hit her?”Sheriff Thayer said now, her voice still calm and friendly.

Jared stiffened, and for a second, the silence hung heavy in the air.

“Of course I didn’t,” he said after a moment. “I’d never hit a girl. My mom would kill me.”

It probably wasn’t meant to be funny, but under the circumstances, it struck me as such. I suppressed a snort. Both of them glanced over at me. “Sorry,” I said.

The sheriff turned back to Jared. “What was the fight about?”

Jared’s eyes turned flat, like blue circles painted on paper. “I’d rather not say.”

“Why not?” Mattie Thayer asked. She looked like she wished she had a pencil and notebook handy, to be able to write this down. I opened my mouth to ask whether we needed to postpone this conversation until our parents came home, since I’d finally thought of a reason why the sheriff wanted to know Jared’s age. A police officer can’t interrogate a minor without the minor’s guardian there. Jared was still technically a minor. But before I could get a word out, Jared had answered.

“It’s between Chelsea and me. No one else.”

“In that case,”Sheriff Thayer said, getting to her feet, all warmth and sympathy gone from her voice, “I’m afraid I’ll have to ask you to come down to the police station, Jared.”

Jared got up, too, to face the sheriff across the glossy wood of the coffee table. His posture wasn’t relaxed anymore, and his hands were clenched into fists at his sides. “Why?”

The sheriff hesitated, with a glance at me.

I felt my stomach twist. Something must have happened, something more than Chelsea and Jared having a fight. Couples have fights all the time, without the police getting involved.

“What’s wrong?”

I think Mattie Thayer’s eyes may have softened a little, although it was hard to be sure. “I’m sorry, Jo. But Chelsea Jacobsen’s body was found at the trailhead this morning, and it looks like Jared was the last person to see her alive.”

Jared’s face turned blank with shock, and I scooted around the coffee table and grabbed his arm as he reeled. “Dead?”

The sheriff nodded grimly. “Your brother has to come downtown and make a statement. We’ll also need a DNA sample, to match with skin tissue found under Chelsea’s fingernails. Not that there’s much doubt that it’ll be a match.”

“Are you arresting me?” Jared asked, his voice a whisper. I squeezed his arm.

The sheriff hesitated. “Not at the moment. There may be a question of charges later.”

Jared nodded. I could feel a tremor running through the clenched muscles in his arm. I leaned my head against his shoulder for a moment.

“I’ll call mom and dad, see how long before they’re back. And I’ll call Kelli’s dad and ask him to meet you at the police station. You should have an adult there with you.”

Especially an adult like Owen Stanley. The Stanleyshave been attorneys for generations.

“Come on, Jared,”Sheriff Thayer said. She reached out, and it looked like she was going to grab Jared by the arm and frog-march him out of the house. Jared twisted away at the last second, and headed for the door on his own. The sheriff followed. I stared after them, blankly, until the front door closed with a click, and then I woke up and ran for the kitchen and the telephone.

 
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Tuesday, May 21, 2013

Home for the Homicide Cover Reveal

Looks like it's official, since this showed up on Amazon yesterday. It's the cover for Home for the Homicide, DIY-7, scheduled for release December 3rd.

No, Mischa the kitten (on the floor with the Christmas lights) still doesn't look like a Russian Blue. And Inky (on the table) is more gray than black, while Jemmy (the tiger striped Maine Coon) isn't on the cover at all this time. Nor do I have a creepy shadow, it seems.

However, all that aside, it's a beautiful cover as usual. The book is available for preorder at the moment, for $7.19 (a little off the cover price of $7.99) - on Amazon.


Thursday, May 9, 2013

The Next Big Thing - take 4

Welcome, boys and girls, to another round of The Next Big Thing, this one courtesy of the fabulous Lexi George. If you haven't read the fabulous Lexi's books - starting with Demon Hunting in Dixie - you must. And just to whet your appetite, here's the fabulous Lexi herself, reading the Weenie scene, at the Olde City, New Blood conference in St. Augustine in February.


 
 
 
And now, onto the Next Big Thing, which brings it back to me and my latest book.

1) What is the working title of your next book?
 
Change of Heart. It's the 6th book in the Savannah Martin mystery series, about a recovering Southern Belle realtor in Nashville, Tennessee, and the trouble she gets up to in love and in life.

2) Where did the idea come from for the book?
 
It's the 6th book in a series, so I'm always looking for plot ideas that might fit what I've already got going. The inciting incident - the incident that kicks off the action, namely Rafe sneaking out of bed at 6 AM - was just the next logical progression in the relationship, and then it became about what else might happen when Savannah was up and out earlier than usual. Catching Tim Briggs rinsing blood off his hands in the office sink became the next thing that happened, and it went from there.   

3) What genre does your book fall under?
 
It's a romantic mystery with an amateur female sleuth.

4) What actors would you choose to play the part of your characters in a movie rendition?

British-Nigerian actor O.T. Fagbenle looks a lot like I imagine Rafe in my head. Boris Kodjoe and Shemar Moore would be OK too, although they're both getting too old. And Savannah looks sort of like Faith Hill: a pretty and sexy girl-next-door type.

5) What is the one-sentence synopsis of your book?

It doesn't really have one. Or maybe I should say that I haven't taken the time to come up with one. The tagline on the book is "The honeymoon's over..."

6) Who is publishing your book?

It's part of my self-published series, so the short answer is, I am.

7) How long did it take you to write the first draft of the manuscript?

Two months. The amount of time it usually takes me to write this length book.

8) What other books would you compare this story to within your genre?

Most people seem to think the Cutthroat Business books remind them of Stephanie Plum. Not surprisingly, since that's what I was reading when I wrote the first book. There's more emphasis on the romantic relationship, though. The series is really one long romance novel more than anything else. Unless the mysteries are directly related to the romantic relationship, they're more in the vein of background.

9) Who or what inspired you to write this book?

My readers! I thought the series was finished after five books, but so many people emailed me asking for more, that I figured I'd give it a try and see if I could get back into it. It's been nice, visiting with old friends. I just hope I've managed to recapture whatever magic the original books had!

10) What else about the book might pique the reader's interest?

I have no idea. It's just the next installment of the ongoing saga of Savannah and Rafe, you know?

 
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Change of Heart is available in digital format from the following e-tailers, starting today:
 
 
 
BARNES AND NOBLE

SMASHWORDS

KOBO


Kobo, Apple, Sony and a few others are on their way.

Wednesday, May 1, 2013

Book Lovers Buffet

 

Introducing the Book Lovers’ Buffet. Load up, you won’t gain a pound!

The Buffet’s “Bouquet of Books” sale will be open May 1-3. More than 175 ebooks, all reduced in price to just 99 cents. Save in categories such as Young Adult, Contemporary, Paranormal, Suspense, Erotic Romance, and more!
PLUS, visit the website to win gift cards to your choice of online retailers. $400 in gift cards up for grabs!
Titles from popular authors such as:
· Gemma Halliday
· Angie Fox
· Jenna Bennett
· Amanda Brice
· Jennette Marie Powell
· Clover Autrey
· Carly Carson
· E. Ayers
· Genevieve Jourdin
· CJ Lyons
· Renee Pace
· Sophia Knightley
· Tori Scott
· Meredith Bond
· Emily Ryan-Davis
· Anthea Lawson
· Diana Layne
· Lindsey Brookes
· Gina Robinson
· McKenna Chase

A Cutthroat Business is marked down to 99 cents for the sale, and so are books from a lot of other authors. Enjoy!

Saturday, April 20, 2013

Shiny!

Tall, Dark and Divine, my category length Greek gods romantic comedy from last summer, has a new cover. I don't really think I need to say anything else, do I?

No, I didn't think so. It speaks for itself.


Wednesday, April 10, 2013

Authors in Bloom

UPDATE as of 7 pm Central Time on Sunday, April 21st. The Truly Random Number Generator/Picker chewed over the comments and decided on #3.

Congrats, Savannah; you are the winner of the book and magazine. Hope you'll enjoy, and thanks to everyone for playing!

 
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Hello, and welcome to the Authors in Bloom blog hop... or at least my own little corner of it.

Starting today - April 10th at 6 am - and running through April 19th at 11:59 pm, an estimated 65 of us are participating in this event, organized by the fabulous Dianne Venetta.

If you hop from blog to blog and leave a comment on each, you'll be entered for the grand prize, which will be awarded by random drawing by Rafflecopter, and which consists of a Kindle Fire or a Nook (winner's choice) along with a gift certificate for books - since you'll want something to put on that eReader.

In addition, those of us participating are also giving away individual prizes. In my case, it's a print copy of the first book in my cozy mystery series, Fatal Fixer-Upper, about New York City textile designer Avery Baker who inherits her Aunt Inga's house in tiny Waterfield on the coast of Maine, and who goes up there to renovate the place, only to fall in love with the handyman she hired to help her.

Along with the book, there's also a subscription to This Old House renovation magazine.

I'm supposed to share a recipe or a gardening tip with you. Since I'm not much of a gardener, I figure I'll go with a recipe, one for Avery's favorite dessert, and the state snack of Maine: Whoopie Pies.

Whoopie pies are a Pennsylvania Amish tradition originally, although these days, they’re considered more of a New England phenomenon. According to food historians, whoopie pies were originally made from leftover batter, and when the children would find them in their lunch boxes, they’d yell “Whoopie!” Hence the name.

Traditional whoopie pies are made with vegetable shortening, not butter (although the recipe will work with butter, too, if you insist). The original and most common whoopie pie is chocolate with vanilla filling, although pumpkin whoopie pies are a favorite seasonal variation.
Here’s what you need to make them:
  • 1/2 cup solid vegetable shortening
  • 1 cup firmly packed brown sugar
  • 1 egg
  • 1/4 cup cocoa
  • 2 cups all-purpose flour
  • 1 teaspoon baking powder
  • 1 teaspoon baking soda
  • 1 teaspoon salt
  • 1 teaspoon vanilla extract
  • 1 cup milk
Preheat oven to 350 degrees F. Lightly grease baking sheets.
In a large bowl, cream together shortening, sugar, and egg. In another bowl, combine cocoa, flour, baking powder, baking soda, and salt.
In a small bowl, stir the vanilla extract into the milk. Add the dry ingredients to the shortening mixture, alternating with the milk mixture; beating until smooth.
Drop batter by the 1/4 cup (to make 18 cakes) onto prepared baking sheets. With the back of a spoon spread batter into 4-inch circles, leaving approximately 2 inches between each cake. Bake 15 minutes or until they are firm to the touch. Remove from oven and let cool completely on a wire rack.
Meanwhile, make the filling:

  • 1 cup solid vegetable shortening
  • 1 1/2 cups powdered sugar
  • 2 cups Marshmallow Fluff
  • 1 1/2 teaspoons vanilla extract
In a medium bow, beat together shortening, sugar, and Marshmallow fluff; stir in vanilla extract until well blended. When the cakes are completely cool, spread the flat side (bottom) of one chocolate cake with a generous amount of filling. Top with another cake, pressing down gently to distribute the filling evenly. Repeat with all cookies to make 9 pies. Wrap whoopie pies individually in plastic wrap, or place them in a single layer on a platter (do not stack them, as they tend to stick). You can freeze them the same way, by wrapping each pie in plastic wrap and putting them in a freezer proof container. Thaw them again in the fridge.

And that, my friends, is how you make whoopie... pies!

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